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October 23rd, 2017, 6:35 pm
yeah... some of the things that were happening in the beginning of the story wasn't really doing it for me, I removed Chapter 0 which was a pilot. I think having it up only confused people as to what was happening: was it the future? was it the present? stuff like that.

I also got rid of Simon's voices in his head, since I think it'd be much more of a personal thorn in Simon's side if it's just one other personality that constantly conflicts with him, rather than multiple voices in his head telling him to kill himself.

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